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楼主  发表于: 2009-03-04 10:21

 自觉默写课文Lesson 6

因为每节课课不可能让每个人都站起来背诵课文,所以,我们只能靠自觉预习和复习,开个小帖,我们给自己一个压力,在没上台背诵的情况下自觉在这里默写,然后交给camby老师改


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1楼  发表于: 2009-03-04 11:22
I first.(以人格保证,俺没有翻书看的 )

Lesson6

  i have just moved to a house in Brige Street. Yesterday, a beggar knowed at my door. He asked me for a meal and a glass of beer.  In return for this, he stood on his head and sang songs. I gave him a meal . He ate the food and drank the beer,  Then  he put a piece of cheese in his pocket,  and went away.  Later a neighbour told me about him, his name is Percy Buttons. He calls at every house once a month,and always asks for a meal and glass of beer.


自纠错误:... He calls at every house once a month,.... ----He calls at every house in the street once a month,
                 其余大体一致。

Lesson 7
  The plane was late and detetives were waiting in airport all morning. They were expcting a valuble of  the diamons from South Africa. A few hours earlier, someone told police that thieves would try to steal the diamons.  When the plane was arrived, (tow man took the parcel off)错误  ,some detetives were keeping inside( mian airfried, while others.......)----错误。

When the plane was arrived,some detetives were keeping inside the mian bulding ,while the others were waiting on the airfield..............(L.7不熟练,有待重新默写。)

有劳老师批改。
  
[ 此帖被涙吇在2009-03-04 11:31重新编辑 ]
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2楼  发表于: 2009-03-04 12:46
Good job!
Please keep it up.
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3楼  发表于: 2009-03-04 12:57

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这种方式也是很好的一个巩固方法。
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4楼  发表于: 2009-03-04 12:57
班长发话,手下不能不跟风呀,,就是泪子大人默写几句英文,还得人格保证,,吓死猪头们了
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5楼  发表于: 2009-03-04 13:08

 hilda也来背书

I have just move to a house in Brideg Street.Yesterday,a beggar knocked at my door ,he asked for a meal and a glass of beer.In return for this,the beggar stood on his head and sang songs.I gave him a meal,he ate the food and drank the beer ,then he put a piece of cheese in his pocket and went away.Later a neigbour told me about him.Everybody knows him.His name is Percy Buttons.He  calls at every house in the street once a month,and always asks for a meal and a glass of beer.
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6楼  发表于: 2009-03-04 13:12
在公司,没带课本过来,下次再纠错吧。要不然来回看泪子的和我的,太麻烦了一点。不过很明显的一点错误就是:I have just moved ,不是move,还有就是邻居我忘记怎么拼写了,哎,这就是我基础不牢的表现呀。下次一定会记得不仅背书,还要背单词拼写。大家加油哦。
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7楼  发表于: 2009-03-04 15:26
  

我一看也是 just move 错了。

邻居neighbour也没错。
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8楼  发表于: 2009-03-04 17:29
I have just moved to a house in Bredge Street. Yesterday a beggar knocked at my door,he asked me for a meal and a glass of beer,in return for this,he stood on his head and sang songs.I gave him a meal,He ate the meal and drank the beer,Then he put a piece of cheese in his pocket and went away.Later a neighbour told me about him .Everybody knows him ,His name is Puncy Buttons.He calls at every house in the street once a mouth and asks for a meal and a glass of beer.



改正:Bredge — Bridge
             Puncy Buttons — Percy Buttons
             mouth — month
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9楼  发表于: 2009-03-05 11:28
Good job!
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10楼  发表于: 2009-03-05 23:48
嘻。。我也来啦, 闭上眼背一遍。。。。睁开眼默写一遍:I have just moved to a house in Bredge Street. Yesterday a beggar knocked at my door,he asked me for a meal and a glass of beer,in return for this,he stood on his head and sang songs.I gave him a meal,He ate the meal and drank the beer,Then he put a piece of cheese in his pocket and went away.Later a neighbour told me about him .Everybody knows him ,His name is Puncy Buttons.He calls at every house in the street once a mouth and asks for a meal and a glass of beer.
除了我,再没有人能是我。
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11楼  发表于: 2009-03-06 09:35
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引用第10楼馨妍于2009-03-05 23:48发表的 :
嘻。。我也来啦, 闭上眼背一遍。。。。睁开眼默写一遍:I have just moved to a house in Bredge Street. Yesterday a beggar knocked at my door,he asked me for a meal and a glass of beer,in return for this,he stood on his head and sang songs.I gave him a meal,He ate the meal and drank the beer,Then he put a piece of cheese in his pocket and went away.Later a neighbour told me about him .Everybody knows him ,His name is Puncy Buttons.He calls at every house in the street once a mouth and asks for a meal and a glass of beer.



我来更正你的错误哦。

1、“ in Bredge Street”--- in Brige Street

2、“ Puncy Buttons”---Percy Buttons

3、“and asks for a meal and a glass of beer.” ---and always asks.....



这位同学应该不是我们班上的同学吧?但对你的积极参与感到非常的感动。
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12楼  发表于: 2009-03-06 09:41
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引用第10楼馨妍于2009-03-05 23:48发表的 :
嘻。。我也来啦, 闭上眼背一遍。。。。睁开眼默写一遍:I have just moved to a house in Bredge Street. Yesterday a beggar knocked at my door,he asked me for a meal and a glass of beer,in return for this,he stood on his head and sang songs.I gave him a meal,He ate the meal and drank the beer,Then he put a piece of cheese in his pocket and went away.Later a neighbour told me about him .Everybody knows him ,His name is Puncy Buttons.He calls at every house in the street once a mouth and asks for a meal and a glass of beer.



我来更正你的错误哦。

1、“ in Bredge Street”--- in Brige Street

2、“ Puncy Buttons”---Percy Buttons

3、“and asks for a meal and a glass of beer.” ---and always asks.....



这位同学应该不是我们班上的同学吧?但对你的积极参与感到非常的感动。
"
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13楼  发表于: 2009-03-17 22:15
看了涙吇 妹妹的第一篇默写,虽没看原文,但觉得默得很不错,只小小一点错误:
 a beggar knowed at my door.    划线部分改为 knocked

asks for a meal and    glass of beer   划线部分加a
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